Limited-Time Offer
The first 50 pages can make or break your novel.
It doesn’t matter how epic your finale might be — if you don’t hook readers from the beginning, they’ll never make it to the end.
So much can go wrong in the first 50 pages:
- An opening that takes too long to ignite
- Too much worldbuilding, too little story
- A protagonist readers can’t connect with
- Stakes that arrive too late
- Confusing magic, lore, or terminology
- Scenes that wander instead of building momentum
- A story promise that never becomes clear
That’s why I’ve created this limited-time offer to help fantasy writers know whether they’re on the right track.
Send me your first 50 pages and up to three questions about your manuscript. You’ll receive a private 30-minute video assessment that covers:
- What’s already working working
- Where readers may get confused or bored
- The most important steps for revision
- Answers to your specific questions
Offer details:
- Only 10 spots available at this price!
- Maximum length: 50 manuscript pages or 12,500 words.
- Delivered by private video link within five business days of receiving your payment and manuscript, unless otherwise communicated by the editor.
- Includes big picture feedback; line editing and proofreading are not included. No written evaluation or manuscript comments will be returned.
- Bonus: Book a full manuscript assessment or developmental edit within 30 days of receiving your video, and I’ll apply your $50 payment as a credit.
Don’t wait until the end of your book to find out what’s wrong in the beginning!
Get your 50 pages for $50 assessment now!
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Your Coach: Stace Dumoski
Stace is a fantasy-focused writer, developmental editor and book coach who helps authors build stories that feel like magic. With a background in medieval studies and folklore & mythology, Stace blends craft clarity with wonder—so you can untangle plot and character, make confident “next scene” decisions, and keep moving forward without burning out. Her approach is gentle-but-real: supportive structure, honest encouragement, and practical tools that help you protect your writing time and keep the promises you make to yourself.