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June 14, 2007

II, ii — Iron Rojh

Filed under: The Book of Ten Queens — Stace @ 10:51 pm

SunboltRohj heard the hoof beats long before anyone else in the camp, even over the din of the forge where he worked. Felt it, more like, deep in his bones, a rapid staccato that set his hammer to a faster rhythm. Sparks shot out as he pounded the metal, gleaming cinders that lit upon his heavy work apron like tiny stars before winking out. Each blow fell with precision, despite his increasing speed. His face was flush with exertion, with heat. With anticipation.

He wanted to finish it before she arrived.

By the time those on the outskirts of the camp noticed her approach, he’d laid down his hammer and plunged the glowing length of steel into the water bath. Steam wreathed up and around him, beading against the exposed skin of his face and arms. About him, he heard the other workers in the forge pause in their labors, listening. They were eager for news.

Beyond the covered area where the blacksmiths worked, a throng of fighting men and women was in motion. They wove among the rows of tents, not running, but with a restrained haste in their movement as they gathered on the edge of the camp, watching for their leader to appear, anxious to learn the news she brought. The low, anxious buzz of their voices swirled into the forge, filling the empty spaces created by the stilled hammers, tongs and bellows. The forge workers watched Rohj, waiting to see if he would go, releasing them as well.

But he did not go. He knew her better than most, well enough to guess that she’d come to him first, before she shared her news with anyone else in the camp. He smiled to himself as he thought of the gift he would have for her. Grudgingly, the blacksmiths around him took up their tools once again.

Steam still rose from the water-filled barrel when Rohj reached into it, running his hands down the length of the thing he had made. Three feet of steel, it was, and a hand-span wide. His fingers told him what his heart already knew: it was the finest blade he had ever made.

He pulled it from the barrel and dried the length of it with a soft cloth. It needed tempering, yet, and to be polished and honed, and lastly to be fitted into the hilt he had made days before, the one set with a thumb-sized shard of ruby in the pommel. The Heart of the Rose. It would be enough for now. She would know its quality as well as he, even if it did not yet shine.

Pride gleamed in his eyes as he wrapped the blade in a length of fleece. The noise outside increased and by the cheers that arose from the soldiers he guessed that she must now be among them. The echo of her horse’s hooves still pulsed through him. She was closer now, pace slowed as she moved through the camp but not much. Rohj tucked his gift beneath an arm and went out to meet her.

He had timed it perfectly. Just as he stepped into the sunshine, her pale gold stallion broke through the crowd and came to a rearing halt on the grass before him. She slid to the ground even before the horse stopped moving and strode towards Rojh, a triumphant grin upon her face.

“Dox Imbra,” he said, and bowed.

She was glorious. Though she was dressed in a simple tunic and breeches no different then the soldiers who followed her, she was suffused with a power and physical grace that set her apart from everyone around her, and always had. Even as children playing on the banks of the Tongue he had been captivated by her. Twenty years and royal consecration had only magnified her grandeur.

“Well, it’s done.” She stopped in front of him, hands resting on her hips. “The elders have consented. No more waiting to be beset by raiders, and uselessly chasing after them once the harm’s already been done. We’ll march the army right at them, this time. Show them what it means to have their home invaded.”

She was speaking only to Rojh, not making a speech, but those nearby heard her words and began to murmur excitedly, and the noise grew in intensity as the news spread. This was the message they had all been waiting for: war with the Vinkyr.

“Runners went out already. We might have new recruits as early as this evening. Will you be able to arm them all?”

He gestured to the ranks of workers who had followed him, at last, out of the forge. “We will work day and night until every man and woman who fights for you is outfitted properly.”

“Good,” she said with a crisp nod, and he saw that she had never really doubted him. “We should have a bonfire tonight. There…” she pointed to the peak of a tall hill nestled in a bend of the Tongue. Imbra’s hill, where the sunbolt had been fired into the sky to claim all the lands it crossed for the people of Ular. “Will you see that is done, Rojh? To call my warriors to me.”

“As my Queen desires.” He saluted, fist to chest, and bowed to her once more.

“Good,” she said again. Then, as if she had just noticed (though he was sure it was not so) she jerked her chin towards the bundle tucked beneath his arm. “What’s that?”

“Something I promised you a long time ago.” He lifted it in his hands, flipped away the sheepskin so that she could see it clearly.

She sucked in her breath and her eyes lit up like fire. “My sword!”

“The finest ever forged, as I said it would be.”

She reached for the blade, but hesitated before touching it. “Can I…?”

“It’s yours,” he assured her, and pushed the blade into her hands.

She took it gingerly, balancing the length of steel on the tips of her fingers, feeling the weight and balance, imagining, he guessed, what it would look like when it was finished properly.

She made a low, appreciative noise in the back of her through, the sort of predatory growl usually reserved for their lovemaking.

“Oh, Rohj…” She turned her burning eyes on him. “Now I know we shall be victorious. With this sword, nothing will stand in my way.”

She whirled around to face the gathered warriors, sword blade thrust high over her head, and shouted:

“Nothing can stand in our way!”

The army of Ular roared in response.

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June 8, 2007

One of a million steps

Filed under: links, writing, art, The Book of Ten Queens — Stace @ 8:59 am

Swirly Tree by me, at DeviantArt.comLast night, prompted by my stoopid realization of Wednesday, I used my newly-established weekly writing date to take another stab at writing project that’s been simmering on the back burner for a while. If you only read this on LiveJournal (and I’m not fooling myself, I know most of my readers are LJers) you may not be familiar with The Book of Ten Queens, a work of serial mythic fiction conceptualized several years ago that I’ve made several false starts with here on this site.

Prompted by a writing exercise, of sorts, I realized that my main problem with 10Q was voice: I was trying too consciously to be Mythic, striving for something that sounded ancient and ponderous yet poetic at the same time…and failing miserably. What works best for me is a more comfortable, personal voice — not without artistry, but not overcome by it either. It’s easier to write, and probably more entertaining to read, and since the stoopid realization decreed that I needed to be posting audience-friendly fiction on a regular basis — if only for the personal satisfaction I get from it — it seems that taking a more personal, character-friendly tack with the project is the right course to take. It’s not like I ever intended 10Q to be something “publishable” (though what that means anymore, who knows). It’s practice, really, a step along that million-word march towards being a really good writer.

Last night’s session went really well, for all that I wasted half of my two-hour outing catching up with my former colleagues at Borders. I wrote over two-pages, longhand (which is a lot for me, I’m a slow writer, when it comes down to it…maybe this exercise will help me to speed up some), and will hopefully finish the piece this afternoon, to post over the weekend. So this is just a heads up that a weird little bit of episodic fiction will be appearing in this space soon, and if you haven’t looked at the 10Q section of the site you might want to. Just to prepare yourself. Or to give my site stats a boost for the day.

In the meantime, here are few links from the past few days that have caught my eye:

Thought Provoking:
Pimp My Story: The “ugly duckling” and “naked emperor” archetypes in contemporary news and reality entertainment. A keen realization about media trends. (Poynter Online)

Curious About:
A Dark World Comes to Life: Lucy has been devouring Philip Pullman’s Northern Lights trilogy the last few weeks, and she was estatic to hear a movie based on the first book, The Golden Compass, is coming out this fall. We watched the trailer for it online, and it looks pretty impressive, and since Pullman seems to be heavily involved in the production it should stay fairly faithful to the original. Lucy has a pretty good head on her shoulders about that sort of thing — she saw the movie Ella Enchanted, enjoyed it; then she read the book and promptly declared that the movie was full of silly things and book was far superior. Anyway, we’re looking forward to seeing this when it comes out. (Sydney Morning Herald)

Touching:
Grain d’Or: Corey Amaro’s blog never fails to enchant me, but I especially love this story about an old Marseilles custom about a gift celebrating life’s accomplishments. It actually reminds me of something created in my Imaginarium once.

Mind Numbing:
Warner Bros. buys “Shannara” books: I suppose it was inevitable, given the current Hollywood interest in fantasy, that someone would grab what was the first mass-market fantasy best seller. Admittedly, I’ve not read any of the newer books (just the original trilogy, and it must be over 20 years since I read those) but I’ve never heard anything that made me suspect I was missing anything. Still, if they play up the post-apocalyptic angle as the news item seems to suggest, it could give an interesting new look to fantasy on the big screen. (Reuters)

Exciting as Hell:
Artful Blogging: It’s almost here, folks! Go pre-order your copy and help secure my career with this company!

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January 14, 2007

II, i - Dox Imbra

Filed under: The Book of Ten Queens — Stace @ 7:30 pm

Sunbolt

“Vinkyr.” Others.

Battles upon the shore, fires that bloomed across field and home, the waters stained with the blood of the slain. It was always the same when the Vinkyr came.

The elders faced each other across the flames of the council fire, and there was no argument. “Summon Dox Imbra. It is the task of the Warrior to defend the people.”

And so Dox Imbra was summoned.

“You must make war,” the elders said to her. “You must protect the people from those who seek to drive us from Ular.”

“I will do it,” said Dox Imbra, and she took in her hands a spear, and she took a shield, and she went away from the council fire and the elders. She went to make the war they had asked of her, a war to defend the people from those who brought them ruin. The Vinkyr. The enemy.

And she was not afraid.

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November 26, 2006

Ten Queens Glossary

Filed under: The Book of Ten Queens — Stace @ 5:09 pm

I am not a linguist, and there is no fully developed language for the world of The Book of Ten Queens. However, a few words have emerged that I think add depth to the text as presented. Most often, I’ll use the English word in the text, for clarity’s sake, but the created words linger under the surface, adding additional meaning and subtlety for those who care to examine them. This post will be updated as the language evolves.

Dox = n. daughter

Imbra = related to word, song

Madar = n. Queen, mother; pl. mada

Ul = v. to be

Ular = n. being, the world

Ulet = n. silence, not being, nothing

Vinkyr = n. others, enemy

Visatue = n. journey, tale

::last updated January 14, 2007::

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I - Imbra

Filed under: The Book of Ten Queens — Stace @ 4:52 pm

Sunbolt


Out of silence
came Imbra
and the people followed
into Ular.
The mark was set
upon the shore
and the arrow
loosed into the sun
claimed all beneath its arc
for the people
and for Imbra,
First of all Queens.


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The Book of Ten Queens

Filed under: site, The Book of Ten Queens — Stace @ 4:51 pm

SunboltA long-imagined web project of mine has been The Book of Ten Queens, the first (very brief) chapter of which went up last winter. I never went any further with it because my original presentation concept meant I had to put together a second set of web graphics to go with the text of the second chapter. And since I wasn’t happy with any of my attempts at the graphics, I felt no inclination to work on the text either.

So I don’t have the excuse of graphics and web design to distract me from the writing, I’ve decided to incorporate the project into this journal instead. I’ll let the WordPress tools handle the organization and presentation for the time being, and maybe someday, when there’s enough text to justify it, I’ll spin it off into its own site once again. Meanwhile, Ten Queen posts here should be easily identifiable by the graphic you see in this post.

Inspired by a friend of mine, who has for several months been publishing a brief “Freaky Friday Fiction” in her blog, I’m going to attempt to write a new episode in the book each week. They won’t necessarily be written or posted sequentially, or even in completed episodes, but I’ll put up an index page to keep track of what goes where. Hopefully, this will allow me to start winding my way through the various stories that I have envisioned so far, and discover what other tales are waiting there to be told. Since today is Sunday, I’ll call Sunday my post day, and I’m going to cheat by posting what is already published on the original site. But I’m going to put up the nascent glossary, so the week won’t be wholly devoid of original content.

Enjoy!

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