Look, maybe I am prejudiced, but I do believe my daughter has a streak of poetic genius in her, to go along with her ever-awesome drawing ability.
This was written in her summer school creative writing class. She’s ten (and a half — can’t forget the half) and will start 5th grade in a few weeks.
Swimming
Under the water
Do not swim too fast, or miss the beauty.
Tiny bubbles float
Up and up and up towards the surface.
The tiny ripples
And the light reflecting at the bottom.
It never lasts long.
Soon you must go to the surface to breathe.
But you can go back.
Under water, there is peace and quiet.
It is amazing.
Why must we breath air, and not the water?
You might wonder, too.
Why must we have to leave this paradise,
Under the water?
Why can’t we, too, have gills, fins, and flippers,
As all the fish do?
Swimming is all this. I wish it could last.
by Lucy W.